Jaggerstar, heading your way....

Subject: Jaggerstar, heading your way.... Mon Jul 15, 2013 1:09 pm

Name: Jaggerstar
Gender: Female
Clan: Thunder clan
Rank: Clan leader
Main fur color: a grayish/silver pelt which she inherited by her mother.
Markings: has a Black stripe that goes down her back and sides and it goes to her face on the sides, making her look more tigerish look than cat.
Eye Color: turquoise
Friends: None yet
Foes: The other Clans
Alliances: None yet
History: Jaggerstar was born in thunder clan as a runt. Her brothers and sister, and friends use to tease on how small she was, which made her angry, and aggressive to this day. One day while her brothers and sisters where playing, an attack spranged out from riverclan. Her clan fought and fought until there wasn't hardly many thunder clan warriors at all. Soon some riverclan cats went to the nursery, Jagger had a sense to hide in one of the cracks in the den, and she watched as her mother fought for their live's a d she saw her mother drown in her own blood. They turn to her brothers and the other kits, they only took her siblings jace, match, tail, and leap with them, and killed off the rest of the kits. As river clan left jagger walked out seeing her leader Ravenstar. Ravenstar took her in as her own and teaches her all her leadership skills, and her wisdom. So know that little kit is now the the leader of thunder clan and her name is, Jaggerstar.
Likes: Being tough,fighting for her clan, swimming, the warrior code
Dislikes: Other Clans, unfair cats, going to gatherings

Parents: leaf scar (mother), hop tuck (father.)
Siblings: sisters:match heart and tail wing.brothers: leap foot, and jace square.

Subject: Re: Jaggerstar, heading your way.... Mon Jul 15, 2013 1:51 pm

Welcome Jaggedstar! Great bio, but I wouod add a tad more description.

Subject: Re: Jaggerstar, heading your way.... Mon Jul 15, 2013 3:04 pm

Okay I edited my bio, I just add some onto my description, and I add history and her parents.